- excellent use of differnt shot.
- lip synching was intime.
- shots were well transitioned together.
- poor acting by some members (Alex).
- some of the editing didnt flow together well.
- poor choice of song
Overall im very happy with the feedback personally as only one of the critisms was down to me as i did all the editing for our group. However despite that the 3 reoccuring positives i can claim a major part in as i worked hard to include a range of differnt shots when i was putting our piece together and finding differnet ways to transition them whilst keeping the lip synching in time.